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Comments for 'And Raise Your Head With Pride! Part 2'



Anonymous
9:16 pm | April 24, 2004
whats up the question marks in all the wrong spots?
Arthur Wellesly
6:13 pm | February 22, 2003
Not bad. I like comments, especially good ones.
Nike
2:48 am | February 16, 2003
This is really interesting. I like how you explain our(more or less)history in such good detail.

Final Score: 9.5/10.
Arthur Wellesly
2:35 am | February 14, 2003
Yes, I started a story about the Covenant a while ago, but I acouldn't think of anything original to go along with the story line so i started this instead where it used only the basic outline of the UNSC organization and history to get it going.
Traumatised Marine
8:19 pm | February 13, 2003
I was interested to see where this story was going to go, and it's both thumbs up, I think. The fact that this story involves no Covenant at all, gives it a really fresh feeling. It's good because we're so used to humanity being united against the Covs that to see them preparing back-up plans where they execute a political leader and broadcast it to break the enemies' moral is really rather shocking, which is an authentic part of the ugly nature of war.

And it's well written.


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