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Comments for 'Shadows of Archon II (part 5) - Big Trouble' |
el_halo_diablo
6:09 pm | August 28, 2002
the Jack-in-the-Box Ronald McDonald one was funny also: "See even Ronald McDonald likes my hamburger!" LOL
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Knightmare
11:51 am | August 28, 2002
subway...? LOL
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Arch
10:46 pm | August 27, 2002
a 300 pound Cortana?! *shudders with revoltion* uh, busy! *rushes off and reprograms the musical with a slim, somewhat more revealingly datad Cortana* now i'm sure THAT'S what we all want to see in a musical *laughs as Cortana vaporises the MC in a cowhorned helmet*
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Vero
9:48 pm | August 27, 2002
Anyone seen the new Jack-in-The-Box commerical? Where Jack is in the subway and he meets some person named Jared. Then after he takes a bite from the sandwich, Jack asks" SO what do you think?" Then jared said" MMMMMMMMmmmmm" Jack said" See even Jared from subway likes my sandwichs!" HAHAhAHAHAHAAHHAAHAHAHAHAH
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el_halo_diablo
12:05 am | August 27, 2002
aurg just think of a 300 pound grunt,"wow that grunt needs to go on the Subway diet!"
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Wado
6:43 pm | August 26, 2002
I warned you it was a curse didn't I, lol...
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Knightmare
6:23 pm | August 26, 2002
and please GOD get the image of the 300 pound Cortana outta' my head...
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Knightmare
5:58 pm | August 26, 2002
phew... its over...
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Wado
4:19 pm | August 26, 2002
Okay, the 300-pound Cortana has sung. The musical is over. Carry on.
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Knightmare
4:06 pm | August 26, 2002
Oh god.... *Hears it on the speaker in the street.* TURN IT OFF!
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Wado
3:03 pm | August 26, 2002
Careful now or I'll curse you all with "Halo the Nordic Musical". ;-)
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Knightmare
2:58 pm | August 26, 2002
*Backing away slowly* Yes... LOL... Right... uh... HEY LOOK DONUTS! *Rushes off*
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Wado
2:40 pm | August 26, 2002
Thanks Arch. Oh, I hope nobody took offense to my bad humor. It was supposed to be funny, you know LOL.
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Arch
2:31 pm | August 26, 2002
support? you needed it? weeeell then, don't i feel flattered! anyways, you wrote well, and have a horrible sense of humour sometimes. like in your last comment. keep at it, man, you da best!
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Wado
2:20 am | August 26, 2002
Darn it, I'm no punk B'-tch! And it's covenstEIn not covenstIEn -- ha, ha, [laughing at own joke] I got that from Young Frankenstein. [More laughing] "super-genious", I can't spell it right so I probably can't ever be one.
Seriously though, thanks for the comments and support. All I can say is that I think it helps for me to slow down a bit. I wanted to tell a story so much that I sort of lost out on making the writing flow nicely. I really don't need to try to ram a story down the readers throat. Things flow much better off the pallet with some sugar and spice. I hope that I can remember this because when I first submitted stories, it wasn't for the story it was for the expression and that was fresh, the story isn't.
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Knightmare
2:00 am | August 26, 2002
anyways, nice change.. very cool. keep it going wado
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Knightmare
1:59 am | August 26, 2002
well then i'd say covenstien is one smart ass #$#%^$#
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el_halo_diablo
12:57 am | August 26, 2002
Yah you better catch up on my series bitch! ;) j/k
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Wado
8:51 pm | August 25, 2002
Thanks, I've got to start reading other story posts again, got tied up, not enough time. I'll see what's up with your stories.
I don't know what to say about Noc except you might not see him for a while, but think about this: Covenstein was a super-genious. Imagine someone so smart that quantum physics is like what simple addition is to everyone else. He worked for years with his Nomdian companion the Grace. He knows that one day the Nomdian is going to try to eat his brain but doesn't know where or when.
Well that's it.
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el_halo_diablo
8:26 pm | August 25, 2002
It was good, I liked it, but I dont get what was up with Noc. Lol white apes with elite masks...Great randomness. Keep it up Wado!
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