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Comments for 'Chapter 3: Friendship'



Vinny
11:09 am | May 20, 2003
Oh ok, thanks. lol scope, sometimes they have to die. Like in lvl Halo, you have to kill the Grunts before the Pelican can come in....
Wiley Kimball
6:34 pm | May 19, 2003
Just type [indent] at the start of a paragraph, when you submit it, the [indent] will dissaper and there will be a space instead. dont worry, confused me too at first.
scope
1:48 pm | May 19, 2003
9/10 Dude why u kill the grunt the grunts are cool. Anyway good job.
Vinny (Author)
3:32 am | May 19, 2003
Thanks for the good reviews guys. The thing about indents, I'll start doing that. The thing is I use Tab when I write my stories in Wordpad, I guess it doesn't register that when you copy it on here. I'll use space from now on.
harley
3:25 am | May 19, 2003
A thing you need to put indents in your paragraphs.
Ace
7:21 pm | May 18, 2003
Wow man, kinda sad. I was beginning to like that Elite. Good story keep up the good work. Thanks some more wiley.

*LISTEN TO WILEY*
Wiley Kimball
4:30 pm | May 18, 2003
It sucks that the Elite died, but good story anyway. 8/10

*REVIEW ACE'S STORY*


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