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Comments for 'Episode 2: Forerunner'



John Kitchen (con,)
6:45 pm | December 9, 2003
Also, I didn't ask a question, who's not legible now buddy??
John Kitchen
6:44 pm | December 9, 2003
Well, I'm sorry if your 2nd grader who can't read yet, but me and my freinds can read it just fine. So, don't even try it buddy.
Anonymous
10:11 pm | December 8, 2003
I'll answer that one, John: it's hard to enjoy "art" that's not legible.
The Unorthidox Everything Man (John Kitchen)
6:09 pm | December 7, 2003
Well, it sounds good to me. Why can't you people just appreciate the story, instead of getting into grammar and stuff, it's art, not skool.
CoLd BlooDed
5:33 pm | December 6, 2003
He was soon to be corrected, as two Elite looking aliens strode out from behind the rock, where they had taken cover.

There should be no commas in this sentence, if you read it out loud you'll know somethings wrong with it.

There are some other grammar problems like that, but overall it was fine. 7/10
witelancer
2:48 am | December 6, 2003
the beginning was good, i guess, but i lost interest after the "omg its the forerunner/flood"... talk about overdone concept. Otherwise, the Covenant/Human fight was decently done.
6.5/10


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