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Comments for 'Croton 9: Into the belly of the beast…and it’s not feeling too well.'



spectre
1:33 am | April 26, 2004
Does anybody know if there are going to be more books after "First Strike"?
CoLd BlooDed
11:26 pm | February 22, 2004
Hey Awacar, my second chapter has come out, you should check it. :D
CoLd BlooDed
7:36 am | February 22, 2004
Hmmmm...maybe you're right.
Awacar
6:42 am | February 22, 2004
CoLd, do you think that they know how to do that? I'm very doubtful.
CoLd BlooDed
4:47 pm | February 21, 2004
Unless your Schizophrenic or just simply being annoying by acting out four different sides, or even transexual (trying to act out a girls side, eh?), I suggest you stop before you get ahead of yourself before you get your IP banned. Oh, and I don't plan to diss you back, dude (or chick), as all those "insults" were pretty damn pathetic, get a life.
MC's Cousin
2:48 pm | February 21, 2004
Hey! STOW IT! You want to shout that kinda stuff? Don't do at at HBO. This is for people who actually have a life more than writin' stuff like that. This is for stories about HALO and their readers, not crap like you.

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CoLd BlooDed
2:14 am | February 21, 2004
Shut the fuck up...I mean it.
ANOUNOMYOUS
1:54 am | February 21, 2004
IT WAS THE AUTHER COLDBLOODED HE IS A NASTY SICKO I NO IT I PEEKED IN HIS BEDROOM AND SAW HIM HAVING SEX WITH DIVA GIRL YOU MORON!!!!!!!
FROM A GUY THAT THINKS THE NAVY SUCKS
1:45 am | February 21, 2004
YOUR MOM IS SO FAT WHEN SHE WORE A YELLOW SHORT AND BENDS DOWN OEOPLE SAY TAXIE.YOU SHOVED A BATTERY UP YOUR BUT AND SAID I HAVE THE POWER.I WILL KICK YOU SO HARD MY BOOT WILL BE STUCK UP YOUR ASS.DAMN YOUR BREATH SMELLS LIKE A THOUSAND ASSES, HAVE YOU EVER HEARD OF A BREATH MINT.YOUR SO DESPERATE TO SEE YOUR MAKER YOU JUMP OF A BUILDING AND SAID HY MAKER.YOU SAT ON A COOKIE AND SAID SORRY MOMMY.AND GO SUCK A MONKEY.YOU WENT INTO A FLEA MARKET AND SAID BRING ON THE FLEES.YOU AND YOUR TOGETHER MEANS TWO MORE BITCHES TO SERVE.I BROUGHT A BRA TO COVER YOUR MAN BOOBS.AND YOU SUCK.BUT LEAST EVREY THING YOU HAVE DOESN'T NOT!!!!!!!NOW SEE IF YOU CAN DISS ME BACK.ASSHOLE.
NAVY
1:41 am | February 21, 2004
Hey don't talk about that shit we are dieing in irak here and all thinking is about mindless prasites that go into peoples minds man go suck amonkey.
a diva girl
1:41 am | February 21, 2004
HEY BABY WANT TO MEET ME IN MY HOUSE FOR A LITTLE PRIVACY.I TOTALLY WANT YOU.
IAmDelta
6:02 am | February 20, 2004
Hmmm...where to go with this one. One definite compliment: your dialogue was excellent. Formatting could have been better, but what the characters said was realistic and interesting. I realize I cannot really comment on plot because I haven't read the rest of the series. It was interesting, I'm just not quite sure what was going on... And it was kinda off the wall, although I thought the television monitor replacement was mildly amusing. Um...yeah I dunno. Good luck though...
CoLd BlooDed
11:57 pm | February 19, 2004
My apologies, I guess that wasn't the author, sorry...
CoLd BlooDed
11:50 pm | February 19, 2004
I see that 'Anonymous' is the author, replying with the most retarded response I have ever seen. What were you thinking? Just to tell you, that did NOT make you look at all good.
Anonymous
9:11 pm | February 19, 2004
why dont you feel so well r u sick do you have strep throte or the common cold perhaps the flue i hope you dont have assburgers
MC's Cousin
3:06 pm | February 19, 2004
What was that? No really, what was that? I mean that was so pointless...so incredibly stupid...I am shocked, almost too shocked for words. That you would destory a good apsect a Halo, and the storyline.
Ahhh...see where I'm going, that was just plain silly.

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