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Comments for 'The Traumatised Marine (final bitesize part 3)' |
Krieg
7:15 pm | March 31, 2003
Brilliant story... ties up all loose ends and was exciting consistently. If only the poor marines could have lived...
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TheRedFaction
2:03 am | March 22, 2003
Very brilliant. The fact that they all came in at the same time also made me feel better about finishing it. It was like...like reading Silent Hill in a book, rather than playing the game. Keep it up, TM.
\n\nThe Traumatised Marine (bitesize Parts 1,2 & 3) have received a grand total of 10.0 points out of a possible 10.0.
\n\nTheRedFaction
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Traumatised Marine
2:35 pm | March 16, 2003
Well, that wouldn't be too great a read I don't think, where would I go with it? OK you could describe what it would have felt like, but after that it would have been mindless blasting until someone put the poor git out of his misery.
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HaloFREAK
12:13 pm | March 16, 2003
poor kennedy my ass! killin mendoza when he isnt even completely insane yet!
yet again you made a great story. are you writing a chapter with sarge as a combat form?
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4:41 am | March 13, 2003
That is some crazy shit. In a good way of corse, but very intense. Insane. You detailed every thought and sight like your own memeory. Great job. I knew from the very beggining when he started ot go insane who this guy was, and I also figured he wouldn't make it out alive.
Btw, you did a good job tying it in with the game, such as the covenant dropship and distress becon.
I hope this isn't the last of your work.
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AlphaBravo343
2:51 am | March 13, 2003
I loved your story, but you seem like one of those guys who enjoys fighting the flood. I think you should make a story where the marines defeat the flood.....for once, lol. But it was deep, I wouldn't have dropped the gun like a pussy though. Great story, keep up the good work!
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Steele
2:26 am | March 13, 2003
That was deep! There's no other word for it. That was without a doubt deeper than the deepest depths of deep!
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Tank
8:51 pm | March 12, 2003
I luv your fiction, TM! That was a wicked ending!
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monitor101
4:45 am | March 12, 2003
That was an awasome shot story poor Kennedy.
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