Comments for 'Spartans Return to Earth (Entering the City)'
SOS.Odin
9:22 pm | February 6, 2004
not bad. should use the code and more detail only probs i see good job
UNSC-StaffSGT
12:06 pm | February 4, 2004
Short and sweet good story so far only one minor flaw, a hunrderd Pelicans can earth really use that many resources at once, any ways its just an opinion
