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Comments for 'Under the sergeant's cap (chapter 5)'



Phat Bob
3:36 am | February 6, 2003
This series just gets better and better.
Shadow Spartan
3:18 am | February 5, 2003
impressive, this is quite an amazing series...keep it up dude
Goldie
11:33 pm | February 4, 2003
Ah, wasn't first to comment ;). Anyway, excellent chapter, as always. I love your character development; there are no 'flat' characters in your story, which makes all the more enjoyable to read. I look for to more chapters.
Tank
12:33 pm | February 4, 2003
I liked the bit where the Sergeant explained why he had been at reach and the new neural chip test thingy with Ackerson.

Awesome series!
Looking fwrd V. much to part 6!!!
moniter101
11:51 pm | February 3, 2003
I luv this series!
McduffRedskies
6:27 pm | February 2, 2003
WOW!!

So much.
And it's quality and quantity!

Please dont let it end!!


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