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Comments for 'The Last Battle of Earth'



FOrunnER
3:27 am | December 3, 2003
Shit man, the next thing you know there going to be trying to impersonate Louis Wu.
FOrunnER
3:27 am | December 3, 2003
anyway, nice story. Still no backround, and the numbers seem ridiculously high, but hey, its your stories. 8.2/10
Myth
3:56 pm | December 1, 2003
This Agent Shade stuff is getting really old, I'm 100% with CoLd BlooDed
CoLd BlooDed
12:40 pm | December 1, 2003
I knew that wasn't you, god I hate impersonators.
Agent Shade (the real one)
12:29 pm | December 1, 2003
*sigh* that wasn't me, gay queer fag suckers doesn't even make sense...i'm getting a 86 in english and wouldn't use such words....sorry guys...
CoLd BlooDed
9:38 pm | November 30, 2003
gay, queer, and fag mean the same thing.
Dispraiser
6:26 am | November 30, 2003
Spelling needs work.
Story needs work.
Grammar needs work.

Simple as F-L-A-C-K-F-I-C.
CoLd BlooDed
6:06 am | November 30, 2003
Lol, gay queer fag suckers?
Agent Shade
5:32 am | November 30, 2003
All you guys are gay queer fag suckers. Leave it to me!!
Sentinel
3:27 am | November 30, 2003
Same problems as last time: no backround, what is going on, ect. It's still good(the action is awsome).
7/10


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