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Comments for 'Rash Decisions Pt 1'



duckfoot
6:39 pm | June 19, 2004
spooks sounds good though

overall, 9/10 =p
The spook
3:27 pm | June 18, 2004
Sorry, that was a typo
LostRock
2:22 pm | June 18, 2004
pretty much the same as the prologue. Watch out for redundant sentences like "The dead ONI spooks lay dead." Also, they're not all called spooks. Call them staff or something else.

overall, 7.8/10


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