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Comments for 'The Corporal: Part 2'



Walker
11:21 pm | January 22, 2004
Feet First Into Hell!
Helljumper
7:34 pm | January 22, 2004
That was really good. No complaints on my part. I assume that by SF you mean Special Forces so those marines must have been Orbital Drop Shock Troops. YOu know that makes me happy.

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first to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all
The Scribe
5:42 pm | January 21, 2004
Thanks for commenting, Hikaru. I know that Elites don't usually die that easily, but the first two Elites killed in the story, since they hadn't spotted the Marines yet, hadn't had a chance to activate their shields. But the last set, yes that was a mistake on my part. Thanks and keep reading.
Hikaru-119
1:12 pm | January 21, 2004
The Elites seemed to have died rather easilly from just two rifle shots. Generally unless they are both successful head shots Elites can take two to four shots each. Just so you know. Also I like the concept for the storm. Except the story seemed a bit short in length.


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