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Comments for 'THE QUEST FOR FREEDOM Chapter 1 Return of the Lost Spartan'



el_halo_diablo
2:38 am | September 29, 2002
I think we all own that novel (sadly).
thasupman8
12:00 am | September 29, 2002
by the way where it says arians system, from off the top of my head its supposed to be eridanus i believe, the system of Reach, read the novel ittl say in there.
Spartan415 (MM
10:48 pm | September 28, 2002
I like wat your doing in this series, keep it up.
Thasupaman
10:35 pm | September 28, 2002
ty, ty. but be weary, there wil be chapters with no action, but that would be the chapters that set up the suspense, dont worry itll be good :D btw dont worry about those errors lol i proofread a lot i just happen to overlook sometimes. but im glad you liked the story. btw peoples who read my story i got the EGM HALO2 MAG so if you guys want the info in here that i havent seen on any website come email nme thasupaman8@aol.com This stuff is friggin awesome!
el_halo_diablo
5:06 pm | September 28, 2002
bravo dear ol' chap. I just hope the jewl piece isnt a piece to some kinda super weapon...cause if it is, that would really suck for my story ;) (or would it?). Yah anyways, I didn't notice that many errors (that or I'm used to them.), and it had more action than you described, so for me, it turned out to be a delightful part, keep writing!


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