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Comments for 'Delta Squadron: Chapter One; Delta Squadron'



Steele
1:15 pm | August 4, 2003
Thanks for pointing that out. I knew Milky Way System didn't sound right.
Peregine
1:01 am | August 4, 2003
Earth is in Sol System, not Milky Way. Milky Way is our Galaxy
Steele
7:44 pm | July 28, 2003
Not quite sure what to say to that other than you seemed to be quite insulting.
Spartan 117
3:48 am | July 27, 2003
i like the idea of black squadrons, why it seems a bit unikely. heck, weirder things have happened. but my god. its like a top gun spoof that was trying to be actual writing. and the whole "the only longsword i want is yours" sounds like a line from some cheesy porn. please, no more...
Wiley K.
1:48 pm | July 23, 2003
Yea, that was me.
I only asked once, tho.
Steele
1:50 am | July 23, 2003
Wiley: I remember when I was writing my Defense of Earth series that there was this one anonymous guy who kept asking if I'd read the X-wing novels. I just had a hunch; was that you? It might not be, but I had this hunch like thingy...
Hawk7886
2:35 am | July 22, 2003
Jeez, I can barely speak. I couldn't find a single thing to complain on. Nice story! 12/10
Sterfrye36
7:57 pm | July 21, 2003
No! You can't do this to me! I'm getting back to my Longsword series as soon as I finish the battle for the Norah!
(Not that bad, though. Nice Banana phone thing. reminds me of Wedge Antilles in one of his awkward moments. :-)
Da Mann
6:23 pm | July 21, 2003
Nice! Especially the bannana phone part.
Wiley
4:30 pm | July 21, 2003
*Dances like a dancin' foo*
Can I get an "amen"!!!
Steele
3:05 pm | July 21, 2003
Thanks. The next one will have action in it.

To Wiley: No, it's not dead; I've already started on part 6. Don't know when I'll post it though.
Wiley
2:49 pm | July 21, 2003
So is the "In Defense of Earth" series dead?

9/10
Capo Rip
3:07 am | July 21, 2003
Like your other stories, I just wish it was longer :) Good characters and intriguing prelude to what I know will be some exciting action.
Elfster
1:19 am | July 21, 2003
Good story, Normally I would complain that it didn't have much action but the comedy and romance made up for it.

8/10
Agent Shade
12:56 am | July 21, 2003
finally, some space combat and no more of this ground assault stuff. excellent story Steele, excellent, keep it up 10/10
Agent Shade
12:56 am | July 21, 2003
PS: Welcome back Sarge
Sarge
9:56 pm | July 20, 2003
I like it as well not been here lately a nice refreshing read...
pj-NYkr90
6:54 pm | July 20, 2003
I like it. The story of a fighter squadron...fianlly. and do i see a hint of romance involved too...10/10


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