halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'Taking Halo: (Chapter Four) The Cartographer'



Steele
9:23 pm | June 15, 2003
But, I didn't get the MASs from Red Faction. The idea actually came from a book by John Ringo. In his book they were the ACS (Armored Combat Suits).
Steele
12:11 am | June 12, 2003
I just rented Red Faction II and I'm only on the third level. If you ask me, they could have done a lot better of a job with that game, made it into something great, like Halo...
scope
12:41 am | June 11, 2003
9.5/10 Dude its ok its ok we still love you anyway!
monitor101
9:50 pm | June 10, 2003
I managed to read this story great work Steele yah the Metallica touch was kool. Ok so I can never fit in the time to write fanfics so I have stopped writing stories the Virus will remain unfinished unless someone will be willing to finish it for me. So if someone wants to then email me and whoever has the most knowledge on Molecular biology and Epidemiology and Virology will get to finish it and I will email them the plot and stats of my Virus so its like the Monitor's contest and is open for whoever wants to so email me at wasup1989@hotmail.com. Well got to go good luck.
Agent Shade
9:21 pm | June 10, 2003
YES Steele! Go Metallica! muahaha, nice added touch there. Are the MAS's from Red Faction II? in the game, you can operate this mini-mech suit. if don't know what i'm talking about, check the game out, still, awesome story, keep it up 10/10
Wiley K.
6:52 pm | June 10, 2003
I believe you and I are the only ones that use a Dramitis Persone(SP?), am I correct? I haven't seen one in awhile.


Great story, 9.75/10
'Nosolee
3:12 pm | June 10, 2003
it was still pretty good
Steele
1:51 pm | June 10, 2003
I didn't quite finish this one, cause I wanted to get it posted.
'Nosolee
12:32 pm | June 10, 2003
Really cool story, i liked the touch with Metallica 9.5/10


bungie.org