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Comments for 'The Devil's Brigade prt VI'



Spartan 117
7:32 pm | July 28, 2003
why did u post the same thing twice?
Tango709
7:32 pm | July 28, 2003
its not exactly the same thing... besides, it didnt show the first one so i posted again. it does that sometimes.
Tango709
7:24 pm | July 28, 2003
this goes for the whole series: corps is not spelled corp its spelled corps and what kinda guy would be stuck as a enlisted leatherneck if he had a degree in nuclear physics? they would never let him join the corps, theyd have shipped him off to the Navy to be an engineer on a ship or ONI base. please, don't make ur characters too perfect.
Tango709
7:24 pm | July 28, 2003
this goes for the whole series: corps is not spelled corp its spelled corps and what kinda guy would be stuck as a enlisted leatherneck if he had a degree in nuclear physics? the ywould never have let him in the corps, they would have shipped him off to be a lab rat at the ONI. please, don't make your characters too perfect.
Spookybanana29
7:33 pm | June 28, 2003
It was pretty good...but the last part was kind of coufusing because of the names...but its a good story...

i'd give it a 7.5/10
Red
10:26 pm | June 27, 2003
This is one old ass story... You should probably post the pieces of it closer together.


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