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Comments for 'The Lost Spartan (Chapters 1-4)'



SPARTAN-063
6:38 pm | February 23, 2004
It was the best story!!!!!
Sarge
1:19 am | June 21, 2002
good story but I don't understand why you just didn't make it all 1 chap?
Archangels Blade
11:49 am | June 16, 2002
Eeeeeexactly! If you're gonna insult someone, do it so that you don't insult yourself!
Spartan415
8:00 pm | June 15, 2002
Wow i'm really impressed coming from a guy called fag boy.
fag boy
1:37 am | June 15, 2002
fuckin pussycock suckershit facedum shit fag fuckerbitch
fag boy
1:35 am | June 15, 2002
u suck faggot and ur story fuckin sucked...fuck u dum shit...fuckin sissy girl...go fuck ur dad why dont u...
THE DARK ELITE
12:48 am | June 14, 2002
THE GRAMMER WAS BADREAL BAD
THE DARK ELITE
12:47 am | June 14, 2002
EXELENT, THE BEST STORY THAT IVE READU NEED TO KEEP DOING THIS
Archangels Blade
11:29 am | June 13, 2002
Pretty good story, but next time, slow down. The grammar is so bad that i could barely understand some parts of it. Other than that, if you take the time to write properly, it should be pretty good! Keep at it, man!
Spartan415
5:15 pm | June 12, 2002
Thanks and I'll try to slow down now.
some guy
3:41 pm | June 12, 2002
yeah its a good story just slow it down and work on the grammer, dont do it half assed again, but yeah keep it comming
Potato Flood
2:18 am | June 12, 2002
bwhahahahha!! bwhahaha! abwab;hfabnseubvg!! sfjaonkrb!! bwhahah! shit my pants! bwhahhaha! Cunt!
Spartan415
4:46 pm | June 11, 2002
If you like it tell me and don't talk about my grammer I was doing this a bit fastand messed up on a few things I foud while reading it over.


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