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Comments for 'Rogue Enemies (Prologue - Chapter 2)'



Panzerfaust42
10:39 pm | July 10, 2002
Neato.
Immortal Warthog
11:56 am | July 8, 2002
A couple mistakes but impressive.
Spartan415
9:52 pm | July 6, 2002
I'm doig both stories but i'm stuck on the beginning of chapter 7th and i can't think of a way to keep it going along and thats gonna be the 2nd last chapter of my lost spartan series and then i'm gonna start a new one with him.
Archangels Blade
6:16 pm | July 6, 2002
It's pretty good, but you REALLY have to slow down again. I like it. I like it alot. Keep it going, but you might want to finish your other story too.
Spartan415
2:11 pm | July 6, 2002
I had done all of that the day before in the morning to the afternoon.not the whole time though. I was lucky to have been able to send this because the comp. i did it on a comp. that the modem switches on and off so i was lucky to get the time to send it.
saturn
3:59 am | July 6, 2002
it's better as it progresses. See?, improvement of the trade through practice. You did a good job. it a tad fast. I'm proud of you and since I can't shake your hand, ask a parent/guardian to give you a cuddly wuddly hug.
Knightmare Wolf
2:49 am | July 6, 2002
Couple errors along the way, otherwise great idea and GREATER story! I hope the rest is as good as its intro, one thing before closing; it was a bit fast, slow down the pace


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