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Comments for 'Episode 2- The Spartan's'



spartan 117
8:11 pm | May 19, 2004
y do u use my name?
Spartan177
11:09 am | August 18, 2003
ya dude.
Spartan 117
11:47 am | August 16, 2003
wait... by "their faces" and "his squad mates" you meant the covenant, didn't you? *slaps head* d'oh! sorry, i was kinda unclear on that. i got confused. well, then, it's 10/10.
Spartan 117
11:47 am | August 16, 2003
Corpral James Toye and Zack Dubbah had begun firing on the Grunts. Killing them slowly. Suddenly the Chief ran out into their view and they watched as he rammed his weapon into their faces.

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Tayat stood very still, and dropped his weapon as the big green armored Human killed his squad mates. He finally put his gaze on Tayat. He picked up some of the Methane tank's, about thirty days worth of them. Then, the last thing he could remember was the Humans fist knocking him out.
Spartan117
5:47 am | August 16, 2003
i have no recalection of MC killing any marines... none at all
Spartan 117
9:45 pm | August 15, 2003
i took away a tenth of a point because u had the MC murder two marines... that was dumb. they were just doing their job, and even if they weren't you seem to be turning the MC into a covenant officer. The Covenant kill their own men, not us.
Spartan 117
9:23 pm | August 15, 2003
i think its good, man. 9.9/10
Spartan117
8:42 pm | August 15, 2003
hey spartan, your cool. what do u think of my stories so far?
Spartan 117
8:31 pm | August 15, 2003
didn't you already post this story?
Spartan 117
8:31 pm | August 15, 2003
or did you mean to write "Chapter 3"?
Spartan 117
8:31 pm | August 15, 2003
oh, its a continuation. you shoulda said so!


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