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Comments for 'O.C. Tango Red: Out of the Freezer into the Fire'



Agent Shade
5:18 am | August 1, 2003
lol, told ya
Hawk7886
8:11 pm | July 31, 2003
Very proud indeed! Very articulate, very thorough. Nothing to complain on.Excellent work Shinai! Can't wait to read what happens next. 10/10
Shinai Purugganan
6:00 pm | July 31, 2003
Thanks. No, I'm not particularly new, but relatively speaking I am. Started writing with Remnants of Reach,a story about survivors on Reach and the Covenant left behind to take care of the cleasing, but I decided to put it on hold and do O.C. Tango Red since I'm trying to help the dialogue hunting.
scope
5:09 pm | July 31, 2003
10/10 A diffrent angle
Agent Shade
4:19 pm | July 31, 2003
and i have the honor of the first comment...

excellent job...are you new to the fan fiction? because if you are, this is well done. a unique idea exploring the tech crews on board of PoA. excellent use of grammar and punctuation, i'm sure even Jamirus or Hawk would be proud

keep it up, this is turning into a great story 10/10


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