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Comments for 'Chapter 1: Key to Survival'



Alpha Lance
5:36 am | July 27, 2003
Um yeah indeant'and it shoud be Key to Servival:Chapter 1.
Ishkabibbl
11:45 am | July 20, 2003
If its a good enough story the errors don't stick out as bad, and this one is a good story.

God that was a stupid post.
Steele
10:10 pm | July 19, 2003
You need to kinda chop up the paragraphs. They're pretty big. They were some grammar mistakes, but everyone makes 'em. 8.5/10.
Gasmask
2:27 pm | July 19, 2003
Nicely done. Just a few errors in form, but this is really an interesting story. Keep at it.


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