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Comments for 'Red vs Blue: A new stage'



Sean
3:09 pm | June 28, 2004
Red vs Blue isn't for all ages.( Ah I said pages)
Sean
3:07 pm | June 28, 2004
Dave Red vs Blue isn't for all pages. They swear it sometimes like alot.
Dave Luck
2:15 pm | June 28, 2004
I said, "Don't knock off other people's creations."

There was someone by the name of "Shadow Spartan" (Even that name was stolen from Agent Shade!) who tried to knock off Red Vs. Blue. He did a terrible job.

And one - Red Vs. Blue is all about non-violent Humor for people of all ages. Do not use violence.

- Dave.

(Wait, DID he use violence? I mean, did he? I couldn't read it!)
The NEW Zak
9:32 pm | June 27, 2004
Do any of you ever go to pages, like, in the 150's and 160's, just to see how bad stories were "in the olden days"?
Sean
2:44 am | June 27, 2004
I did.
Severian
2:09 am | June 27, 2004
I didn't even bother reading it. Sean, EVERYONE told you not to write a RvB on the last one's comment page. At least you learned your lesson, I hope...
Sean
6:32 pm | June 26, 2004
You guys are right I paid the price and will never ever do anything shit like this again.
343 Salty Beans
6:30 pm | June 26, 2004
Don't humiliate the name of RvB. Use humor, at LEAST! ARGH!

343SB
Godfather
4:39 pm | June 26, 2004
GODFATHER: Sean, Sean, Sean... what can we say? We gave you fair warning... and you went ahead and did it anyway. Now it's time to pay up. Get him, boys.

*Two mobsters force Sean at gunpoint into a metal box*

GODFATHER: All right. Tony, tell the boys to bring up the cement truck.

MOBSTER 1: Right, boss.

*Cement truck pulls up*

GODFATHER: Any last words, Sean my boy?

SEAN: Uh...

GODFATHER: Goodbye, Sean.

*Cement truck fills box with Sean inside*

GODFATHER: They never learn. All right boys, let's go.

MOBSTER 2: Where to now, boss?

GODFATHER: Time to watch the Blood Gulch Chronicles.
LostRock
3:07 pm | June 26, 2004
I'll repeat the words I said about the last RvB fanfic that came in here...

"Next time any of you feel like making a fanfic with the words 'Red vs Blue' in the title...DON'T!"

We warned you, Sean.
Guardian
2:56 pm | June 26, 2004
just like Dave Luck mentioned, way tooo confusing, and that as far as i can see you ripped off two great movies. Well you ripped of a Movie and the last movie of a trilogy. Anyways.

Frank the Tank, if i remember correctly thats from Old School!...such a great movie. Anyways Rip OFF!!


second. If we are cornered and about to die, ok a bit original, but, "but we give them hell before we do!", Matrix Revolutions, Starting scene Captain Mefune APU leader, right before the machines breach the dock. he says that last part!, such a Rip OFF!!! again.

and no comedy or humor was found in this fic
Dave Luck
2:47 pm | June 26, 2004
Too confusing, too bad, too sad.

Don't knock off Red Vs. Blue. It's pathetic.

- Dave.


P.S "You're on your own out there. Don't knock it."
Grandgamer119
2:45 pm | June 26, 2004
Way too confusing. WAY TOO CONFUSING. Use the RvB names or some that people can remember. Also, it made no sense because I can't see them, so noone knows where they are


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