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Comments for 'All Roads Lead To Sol...Unless Stated Otherwise: Chapter 5'



Berconius
10:53 pm | June 17, 2003
A bit on the trite and sappy side but that can be dealt with... this seems like a bridge between 2 greater parts.It's very good to see that you aren't basing your story on combat alone. That kills a lot of fanfics.

9/10
Agent Shade
9:45 pm | June 17, 2003
amen Steele, amen
Steele
8:11 pm | June 17, 2003
"Cheer up boy, clouds will move on soon!"
--Metallica, St. Anger, My World


Excellent continuation. He did seem kinda like a pimp, though. 9.5/10!
Wiley K.
4:03 pm | June 17, 2003
Wow man, kinda sad. I feel sorry for the guy.
Good story nonetheless, 9.75/10
Agent Shade
1:28 am | June 17, 2003
*sniff* now that was a tear-jerker story...jesus, my mom almost broke into tears lmao. good job, 10/10


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