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Comments for 'Human vs. Covenant War: Part Four: Hansley's Battle'



josh
7:44 pm | July 1, 2003
a vevy good story
Don Q
1:05 pm | July 1, 2003
Bro quit being sorry and apoleetic. If they do not like it they should not read it.
crashedwarthog
6:03 am | July 1, 2003
to be truly honest, this story sucks bad. Everything happens at once with not enough time for the reader to really visualise what's happening, and get a picture in their head of it. Maybe be a bit more detailed aswell. But keep trying, it has the "makings" for a good series, just try and use it well.
Ronald Maszk
2:40 pm | June 30, 2003
I was kidding!lol
GLADIATRRR3000
2:31 am | June 30, 2003
DONT TELL US WHEN THE MAIN CHARACTER DIES!
Ronald Maszk
1:33 am | June 30, 2003
Hey, this is my 4 installment in the Humanvs. Covenant War series. Don't worry, if you hate Hansley, you'll be glad to know he dies in the next one. This is a war series, not a Hansley series. It will have many marines it focuses on, and maybe even the popular MC!


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