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Comments for 'First Contact; Chapter 2: Probe'



'Nosolee
4:46 pm | July 25, 2003
This wasn't good stuff, this was great stuff.
This series has a ton of potential and keeps my attention. 9.5/10.

(I like how you took the indent advice, keep up the good work)
HunterKiller
4:19 pm | July 25, 2003
Good stuff, 9/10
Vege7a
2:06 pm | July 25, 2003
Yeah, really good stuff. :]
Steele
12:34 pm | July 25, 2003
Once agian, man, Good stuff. I could tell you used one of the newer Word systems by the comm. Just use it like COM as opposed to comm. (don't you hate how the processor keeps popping that period up there.)


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