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Comments for 'Earth: A Halo Tale: Part 1, Chapters 1 & 2' |
Nike (again)
6:20 pm | January 31, 2003
*?
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Nike
6:15 pm | January 31, 2003
Why is the comments page longer then the story. lol.
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Superz423
1:57 am | January 31, 2003
i cant say enough
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Superz423( zach)
10:41 pm | January 30, 2003
ALL HELL!: part 1
By: SuperZ423@netscape.net
chapter 1: 9:07 PM 4/7/2455
"Captain, South corridor 2 miles!" A marine said frightenned. Captain Keyes turned and looked behind not only to see four brave Marines running behind the Warthog.The Warthog was running low on fuel. " I should say, Maxamillian. I would think there would be more coveant soldiers." Captain Keyes asked to the driver. Just as Captain finished his sentence, Maxamillian swerved just hitting the leg of a Coveant soldier. The leg of the soldier flew off, the blue blood oozing from the leg of it. Captain Keyes jumped out of the gunner seat and rolled to the ground.
"Shoot, shoot!!!" Screamed a marine.
The guns blared killing 5 coveant soldiers. Captain Keyes smacked a Jackal over the
back of his head(or should I say IT). The Jackal's neck sprayed orange blood everywhere.
About two hours later all people, aliens, warthog, lay in silent dead. Captain Keyes lay
breathless. he sat up, turned around not only to see a banshee flying endless towards him.
Chapter 2 : 4/7/2456
Master Chief awoke, in a cold sweat, and buzzing and beeping. " Having those dreams again?" Cortana asked. "Yea." Master Chief said dreary. "Well have those dreams some other time because were about to hit the planet Zuzena!" Cortana screamed angrily.
Master Chief pulled the throtle towards him, about breaking his hands.(See, folks Master
Chief has reacurring dreams about Captain Keyes death.) Out of nowhere the escape pod hit Zuzena, making a 60 ft. indent in Zuzena's crust.
Four days went by. Master Chief arose out of the escape pod. He pulled out his rope, and latch, and threw it up to the top and climbed out to find a gun to his head.
to be continued
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Superz423
10:41 pm | January 30, 2003
not to brag but my storys on the way! Hope you like it, and milte, no more plagerism!
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Superz423
10:41 pm | January 30, 2003
Hello folks, not to brag, but my story is on the way!
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Nike
10:36 pm | January 30, 2003
Part 2, Chapters 3&4 has been submitted.
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Pilot 415
9:15 pm | January 30, 2003
good story can't wait to see what happens next
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Nike
8:01 pm | January 30, 2003
Superz423 (Zach) is another one of my friends. He's a better conversationalist then Milt is, and he's got a story on the way. It's all ready been submitted, so stay tuned.
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Superz423
1:47 am | January 30, 2003
Uhhhhh, d'oh, MILTE ORDAKOWSI III, dont commit plagerism because its naughty and wrong. Im A stupid head. Andddd, by the way good story NIKE!!!
A.k.a one of my commrades at my school
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Nike
10:47 pm | January 29, 2003
Ah ha, Miltie Ordakowski III! The poem IS an exact copy of the one from Bungie's Joe Someone. You were going to commit plagarism on me, weren't ya? I'm too smart for youuuuuuu! Muahahahahah!!!!
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Zeus
9:44 pm | January 29, 2003
I might have one coming, too.
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Zeus
9:40 pm | January 29, 2003
Great! You were right, it is changed! It's still good, though. Keep it up, and you'll be one of the great authors like Wado!
P.S.
Save it to a disk for me.
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Tdaddy
9:04 pm | January 29, 2003
good job
cant wait to read the rest
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Wado
7:52 pm | January 29, 2003
Nice piece of writing. You did a nice job not rushing the story.
I thought it would have been funny to find out that Keyes is either the Keyes Blob or a hologram. I just couldn't figure on why Keyes was out of cryosleep, I mean, what could he eat for two years (making the mental leap that he is still alive). Anyway, with Keyes' neural implants, you could still have him as a hologram, then give him a new robot body... Captain Jacob "Terminator" Keyes.
Definitely keep up the writing, anyway, if you have the time (no more bad grades...grrrrrrr!).
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