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Comments for 'Hit Hard Ch. 4: --Reclaimer--'



The Author
2:14 am | February 25, 2004
Perhaps in their tactics, but their shields give out pretty easily.
CoLd BlooDed
11:32 pm | February 23, 2004
Covenant in Nylund's books can sometimes seem harder than the Covenant in the game.
The Author
3:58 pm | February 22, 2004
I usually base my enemies like in Eric Nylund's books, although Legendary would be pretty cool...
CoLd BlooDed
2:23 am | February 22, 2004
Yes, always base your stories on Legendary, ALWAYS, NO EXCEPTIONS! :P
The Silver Spartan
11:37 pm | February 21, 2004
Great story! I have only one tip, I learned this about a month ago and I have found it helped my series (Scope) out a lot: base the Covenant on Legendary, it really makes it more interesting! I also liked the idea of the three point-of-views on the Fafaw part!
The Author
5:37 pm | February 21, 2004
Well most of the other parts aren'e as good as this one...
The Author
5:37 pm | February 21, 2004
Well pt. 1 isn't as good as this one.

And for those of you who read it, I will be discontinuing my Halo: Dark Aftermath series until I am done with this one. This series seems to be getting better remarks and I need time to think up a good plot for HDA.
ONI_operative_343
12:33 pm | February 20, 2004
yea, no major issuses, just editing stuff towards the end.

i liked it, i gotta go find part one now. makes me look forward to future stuff, too
Anonymous
9:15 pm | February 19, 2004
you shouldnt hit people with blunt objects like a roll of paper towels thats just meen
The Author
8:48 pm | February 19, 2004
Well for the record this is only pt. 1 of this chapter, so I didn't want to make it too long.
MC's Cousin
2:55 pm | February 19, 2004
Pretty good. It kept me reading and that's always good. You need to read through it a little better next time ([indent) you know? Anyway, it was still good, if not a little to short.

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