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Comments for 'Halo: Captain Keyes Story Part 2'



monitor101
3:50 pm | April 5, 2003
No diablo he won't black out at the end of every chapter but come on he's an old man.
el_halo_diablo
11:00 am | April 3, 2003
well I said i'd read the next one, so I'm not going to let you down. Ok the story had only a few errors, but can you please have the people call them Covenant once in a whiole, instead of just Covies. Overall, nice effort. Will Keyes blank out at the end of every chapter? ;)
monitor101
2:11 am | April 3, 2003
Thancks dispraiser well I just got halo:the flood and started reading it and found out how far off this story is but oh well.
Dispraiser
1:35 am | April 3, 2003
Actually, though we all know how this story will end, it is quite entertaining. As much as I would ove to find something to rat on this fanfic with, I don't see too much... BESIDES COVIES!!! It is like saying LOL. Do you walk up to your friends and say LOL? No. It is internet abbreviations...

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+Great story, actually *Gasp* original. All the people who write stories about "Pointless battle" could learn a lesson here.
-Covies? Covenant.
monitor101
4:48 pm | April 1, 2003
Thanks Kinsella!
James Kinsella
2:24 pm | April 1, 2003
again*
James Kinsella
11:42 am | April 1, 2003
Once agian monitor you have created an incredible story of what happened on the P.O.A after the crash. Keep them coming!


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