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Comments for 'Afternoon's Twilight'



Awacar
3:38 pm | December 16, 2003
About Saddam, what have they got out of him? In my eyes nothing. Sure, two high Iraqi politicans/generals or whatever they were have been put out of action, so what? The forces would have taken them out soon anyway I think. Well, the truth about the weapons of mass destruction thing can be revealed easier if Saddam is caught, but in my way of thinking, his death would balance this up.
Jamirus99
4:41 pm | December 15, 2003
Good stuff, Mainevent. A bit choppy, so I suggest you review your HBO version and divide it into spaced paragraphs, and work on the pseudocode.

Bagged Saddam. SOS.odin, you are a fool. Had he "gone out like his sons" his "capture" would have been worthless. A dead body doesn't talk. Also, "fickin pimp" is getting to be really annoying.
Awacar
3:06 pm | December 15, 2003
A shame that they didn't shoot him, now he has to go to a court without having the chance to get a death sentence. If he do get a death sentence all the socialists(=commies) in the world will go demonstrating. A shame.
SOS.Odin
2:12 pm | December 15, 2003
indeeed
Walker
2:28 am | December 15, 2003
I think the death of his sons coupled with the fall of his regeime went to his head... he's dead inside, had nothing to live for, but nothing to die for either. I enjoyed watching people in Baghdad run in their homes, produce illegal AK-47s and such, and fire them in the air while cursing Sadaam. They may hate us, but at least they hate him, too. Now we just gotta get Sadaam to admit that he had WMD. Which, of course, he did.

Semper Fi

-Walker
SOS.Odin
8:53 pm | December 14, 2003
so i see
and the fool didnt fire a shot
wuss
shoulda went out like his sons
Mainevent
5:33 pm | December 14, 2003
Turn on the news man. We caught Saddam Hussein.
Mainevent
5:33 pm | December 14, 2003
Turn on the news man. We caught Saddam Hussein.
SOS.Odin
4:52 pm | December 14, 2003
what do you mean WE CAUGHT SADDAM?
Mainevent
4:39 pm | December 14, 2003
To SOS Odin: Yes, I am going to continue them. This is a very short series I am writing until Christmas break, because I've been kinda hurried as of late with projects and exams.

To Elfster: The other story in this series is The Eve of Genesis. Check page 2 or 3 for it.

WE CAUGHT SADDAM! WE CAUGHT SADDAM!!

HELL YEA!!
Jaywhit10
3:35 pm | December 14, 2003
Nice work, damn good story. Im hooked on it now, never can trust a monitor eh?. Nice story, can't wait for next one, good job.
SOS.Odin
3:22 pm | December 14, 2003
this is the second chapter man
and if ya played a lot of multiplayer halo
ud know who the guardians are
Elfster
5:50 am | December 14, 2003
Umm.. Is this the first chapter of a series? if it is, its extrmely confusing. How can the monitor be holy if he was just an AI contrusct created by Forerunners? What are the guardians? Where is this? TOO CONFUSING!

But if I knew the plot better, I'd have to say it was pretty good.
SOS.Odin
4:57 am | December 14, 2003
o and are ya ever gonna do anything else with homeworlds or countdown earth?
them werent bad series at all
not at all
SOS.Odin
4:48 am | December 14, 2003
hehe
thx bruh
Mainevent
1:39 am | December 14, 2003
I sure the hell will. I love Neverland. Well....ever since the Michael Jackson thing...I think you might want to rename your story.

lol
SOS.Odin
1:16 am | December 14, 2003
oh well then
NEVERMIND GUYS!!!
hehe
anyways...I subbed my next chapt.
could ya read it for me when its posted
thx
Mainevent
11:01 pm | December 13, 2003
No, no other site.

I am used to Xbox.com's pseudocode which uses instead of [].
SOS.Odin
10:45 pm | December 13, 2003
what other site are u workin for?
MAINEVENTS A DOUBLE AGENT!!!
Mainevent
10:36 pm | December 13, 2003
Damnit, I used the wrong brackets for my Italicize, the problem with being used to another site's pseudocode.
Kyre
8:42 pm | December 13, 2003
oh.. my... That was, well, not something iv'e read before... Damn good too. like they said, can't wait...
SOS.Odin
5:23 pm | December 13, 2003
i reckin i agree wit walker
this is gettin mad pimp man
gj
Walker
1:12 pm | December 13, 2003
This is getting better and better... can't wait for the next part! Keep it up, Mainevent.

Semper Fi

-Walker


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