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Comments for 'Halo- A Comedy'



someone
8:26 pm | December 19, 2003
that was pretty nice and all but when was there ever a green elite in the game and if your not really going by the game then why isnt it funny? If this is supposed to be funny, then your infintely more better sequel will be worth mabey a quick laugh. Anyways nice story. I liked it quite a bit
Jambun
5:51 am | September 6, 2003
Nice comedy man so the next comedy made by u is a ...... cooler comedy could u send it 2 my_corner_of_the_world_is!hotmail.com

Thnx
MASTER XBOX
7:01 am | August 12, 2003
i liked it keep up the good work but improve thoght it was good i loved it keep writing more pleasw what about an orange elite or mabe even anwhite elite or ,brown eite imagination dont listen to bean his gay i met his mom before i fucked the shit out of her she said so!!!!!
Spartan 117
5:47 pm | July 27, 2003
i did laff at some parts tho
Spartan 117
5:45 pm | July 27, 2003
wow, this is the first review page ive seen that actually had negative comments--not just mine! this wasn't comedy, it was tragedy. im sorry, try to write some other kinda stuff next time, ie action. it's kinda hard to do that bad, even tho it takes a special breed to do it good. and change your name, lest it be a deterrent to potential readers.
Elfster
11:58 am | July 11, 2003
I suppose it wasn't THAT bad. it was comical but i rarely actually laughed. Clever, though. Not bad for a start, but the next one BETTER be infinatly better lol
Steele
3:16 pm | July 9, 2003
You need correct grammar. Otherwise the part about an Elite being named Bob was kinda comical...
Sterfrye36
2:20 am | July 9, 2003
"i think grut should partner up with mc"
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And his name will be Corporal Kippy! (Got that out of the Xbox mag)
Diamond Dog
2:13 am | July 9, 2003
Aw come on it wasn't that bad. If you work on it and think up some new ideas I'm sure you'll get better Lanerd. It's a start, don't get overly discouraged.

The ninja grunt is a good idea, make him do matrix kinda stuff. Expand the food nipple idea, make it a quest to find the food nipple on the starship while the flood are attacking, then have him sail past the flood and covenant all matrix-like.
Bean
4:42 pm | July 8, 2003
WHAT THE H*%# WAS THAT?!!!!!
crashedwarthog
11:15 am | July 8, 2003
thatz a comedy? i think i liked the bit about a grunt wrestling a hunter, but the rest was pretty crap sorry.
pooman
12:16 am | July 8, 2003
srry but that wasent very funny
Blue Phoenix
10:17 pm | July 7, 2003
Umm, uhh, nope.
Berconius
3:09 pm | July 7, 2003
*gape* wow man, you got....skill...at something....

*gape*
Silent Hunter
1:01 pm | July 7, 2003
LMAO!
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4:42 am | July 7, 2003
uh no
crazygrunt
4:01 am | July 7, 2003
i think grut should partner up with mc
Elfster
2:09 am | July 7, 2003
I actually agree with Ish for once.
Ishkabibbl
1:12 am | July 7, 2003
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