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Comments for 'An Osoona No Longer (-Part One-)' |
Anonymous
10:01 am | May 14, 2004
Cold- i am working on Heroic but i got 343 guilty spark an two betrayals done on legendary and i am halfway thru the maw
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Slayer Boi
10:01 am | May 14, 2004
Cold- i am working on Heroic but i got 343 guilty spark an two betrayals done on legendary and i am halfway thru the maw
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Iatro
11:00 am | May 10, 2004
Story inconsistences I let slip in face of a decent story, it -is- fan fiction, after all. ;)
Grammar aside, this is pretty good, I like the characterization of the Elite.
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CoLd BlooDed
8:17 pm | May 8, 2004
Slayer boi, you haven't beaten the Maw on Legendary?
I'm proud to say it's not that hard, and the REAL challenge is beating the entire game on every single difficulty.
(I've done that too.)
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Nick Kang
11:36 am | May 8, 2004
Well then a guess us people here at HBO have a simple circle going here. Us writers make the stories (and comment on a few), and you critics comment on them.
NK
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Lance
11:11 am | May 8, 2004
I can send it, email me and i'll reply it to ya, i'm not on msn much so it may take a few days, but i'll get it to ya
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Slayer boi
9:52 am | May 8, 2004
Lance- i said it be4 and i will say it again, your work amazes me. in Shadow Play part 1 in the comments u said about the story full version etc can u send that 2 me?
Nick Kang- by code u pretty much mean basic HTML coding...
Everyone else- I dont write stories i like to think of myself as a critic even though i probably suck at it, and i leave the story writing to the people who actually have the time and effort to sit down and plot and write a good stroy then post it on here. I am gonna stick to finishing The Maw on legendary 1 day( i dont get 2 play halo much)
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CoLd BlooDed
6:43 am | May 8, 2004
Yes, it is pretty.
ROFL.
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Lance
2:45 am | May 8, 2004
in saying thnx, i meant it truly, not being mean or sarcastic, i thank everyone who gave some constructive critisims because
1. i have bad grammer
2. i have the attention psan of a dead rat
3. what a pretty butterfly
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Lance Johnson
12:50 am | May 8, 2004
So i am a badass nOOb. This is the first story i have ever writen for posting, other than some Sgt johnson stories. So, thnx a lot.
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Nick Kang
12:27 am | May 8, 2004
Okay, since I like your work, I''ll tell you. Normally if you were just some badass n00b, I'd tell you to find it yourself, but I'm nice...
1.
To indent, write [indent] before the indented stuff.
2.
To italicize, place [i]where you want it to begin, and [/i] where you want to end it.
3.
To bold stuff, do the same as italicizing, just with a b.
4.
To underline, do the same with a u.
5.
To place a line across the text, write [hr].
This may seem confusing but it was the best I could do.
NK
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TGC
10:03 pm | May 7, 2004
Interesting...
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the author
9:02 pm | May 7, 2004
3 things
1. what is the code?
2. this is my own version of things, so i kinda made it the way i wanted it
3.i have bad grammer
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Nick Kang
8:09 pm | May 7, 2004
Still a great series, but make more use of the code. And the original soldiers of the Covenant were the Elites, not the Brutes. (This has been confirmed by Frankie's report on the Covenant.) And there are lots of spelling errors.
NK
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No one
6:47 pm | May 7, 2004
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! I love your plot it's very intresting to me. I love your series so far.
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Lance
5:38 pm | May 7, 2004
He's ignorant
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Dark Spartan
5:24 pm | May 7, 2004
Just one question. The first transmission that humanity ever recieved from the Covenant said, " Your destruction is the will of the Gods, and we are their instrument." It would seem unlikely that Walker would not know about this and, " Never [have] thought about it that way." So either you just forgot about this or have never heard of this, or Walker has never heard of this. Just an observation, I am by no means trying to flame you. Keep up the good work.
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the author
3:36 pm | May 7, 2004
wait for the end =)
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Spacefan
2:06 pm | May 7, 2004
Well, guess it's not too surprising to find there are elements in the human government with no honor. I want a happy ending, please?
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I love Elites
11:45 am | May 7, 2004
Bastard, after all he did for them.
Nevermind, I belive he'll be alright.
MORE!!! PLZ!!!
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