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Comments for 'Rebirth - To Biraak'



saturn
4:39 am | May 4, 2003
dang thats a long comment. can anyone top that length? these guys need comments.
saturn
4:32 am | May 4, 2003
guess who's back?! well for now at least. I really like how smooth the writing flows. earlier i criticized a poem for being awkward and pompous and your story is an example of how to sucessfully incorporate a dense vocab. into a fan fic. This doesn't rival FoR, it beats it. However, this is the kind of plot for a THICK book (very very detailed) unlike FoR so it depends. No errors, very complete and well-written. It's cool to see all of you and keep coming back. You people are the HBO Elite Guard, veteran writers.

PS: Would you really name a girl 'Shade'?
monitor101
12:41 am | May 4, 2003
Very nice description kepp it up!
James Kinsella
6:21 pm | May 2, 2003
Good work. I hope this continues for a while, it's good to read something not based entirely on the MC.
scope
10:15 am | May 2, 2003
9.5/10 I love it, plenty of description too.


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