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Comments for 'Halo Heaven: Chapter 2: The Story of the Surviving Spartan IIs' |
JJiggssaw
12:07 pm | April 1, 2004
I think everyone's individual, unproveable theory on what Hunters shoot out of their arms is irrelevent-the point is that it's pretty good writing. It is very much alternative, and the ole fan fic section desperately needs alternative material. Less of the carry-on-from-The Flood/First Strike stuff and more of the things that challenge our ideas of fan fiction. And I, of course, am carrying on that trend of stereotypical fan fiction.
I know this sudden outburst is weird, but thats my soapbox for today. Anyway, I like the story quite a bit.
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CoLd BlooDed
1:03 am | April 1, 2004
We already went over the "Sir Cloud" in the first chapter. And fuel-rod blasts ARE plasma, the only difference is they explode on contact. I think.
Hell Starter, I'll read this later.
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Nick Kang
12:16 am | April 1, 2004
Sir Cloud? Red? M.C29? I can find a truck-load of errors in here. They aren't called laser swords, they're plasma swords. Kinda choppy, and few points of detail. I hate to be the bringer of bad news, although it does remind me a bit of me when I started my writing career. You kept on using 'where' instead of 'were' and Hunters don't fire plasma, they fire fuel-rod blasts. I know I'm being kinda strict, but if you make too many mistakes, it spoils the whole story. Overall the story was okay, good plot and good combat sequences. Just fix up Chapter 3 and you stories will glimmer.
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Hell Starter
9:48 pm | March 31, 2004
Lol, yea I know! Makes it nore unique this way! Do you know any other story with Sir Cloud in it? I didnt think so. So did yall think it was a good story? What about the spelling and grammer?
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Hell Starter
11:45 am | March 31, 2004
Im the auther by the way! I have no clue, I beleive you will find out next chapter ;)
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MasterCD
8:51 am | March 31, 2004
Good. Just one question - Sir Cloud? And I thought calling a Spartan John was strange...
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Anonymous
1:08 am | March 31, 2004
I don't think the covenant got the flood. I think it captured the drop ship.
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Sentinel
1:48 pm | March 30, 2004
One question, where did the Covenant get the Flood?
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