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Comments for 'The First Battle of Sol Part One'



Peregrine
1:12 am | August 16, 2003
Hey, next part should come out tomorrow. I'm planning three part's, then another 'sub part' about a fighter pilot during the battle. And who you callin rookie?
LOL
pj-NYkr90
10:50 pm | August 13, 2003
peregrine is how you spell it. But that's okay. I give your writing a 9/10. You did pretty good. But just a hint of advanced advice. Include detailed battles and stories that are longer that the one you wrote today. I love interesting battles so write one like you did today with a good battle and make it just a bit longer, and i'll love it.
JCDenton
6:50 pm | August 13, 2003
SO I guess you knew that Sol means Earth... yes I knew that too but imn my story I gave it another purpose, 3 sol planets, alike. very well good job, and, as the first rater, I give you a... lets say... a 9.2/10 for now. good job, keep it up. you made a nice start. and very good for a 'rookie'...

don't worry that's a joke.

JCdenton
Creator of Halo: The MCconto Chronicles©
(Part 6 and 7 just released! find them via search buttons!)
Peregine
4:05 pm | August 13, 2003
Hey, this is my first Halo story, and the first of a series.


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