halo.bungie.org

They're Random, Baby!

Fan Fiction


Comments for 'Halo Battle Cry Chapter 1: God Rested'



Johnny
4:38 pm | February 1, 2003
Thought it was intresting. Is there anymore coming?
Lindzi
5:02 pm | October 7, 2002
Brilliant!, a great piece of work defiantly how the book should have been!
Sarge
10:50 pm | August 22, 2002
Hmm I don't know either I'm losing my desire to read or this story just didn't please me oh well don't take it from me I'm to lazy to write my own story so... keep working at it if you've got the dedicaiton to write stuff then keep writing.That's a different style comment for me.
el_halo_diablo
9:27 pm | August 22, 2002
oops that was me
Anonymous
9:25 pm | August 22, 2002
a bit more work....and spend more time on grammar and punctuation (example:"...become some day or lives depend upon it")
Knightmare
1:46 pm | August 22, 2002
Interesting.... I had trouble understanding it at first but it grew on me. This is how the book should have been... you just need to put a bit more work into it


bungie.org