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CoLd BlooDed
2:06 am | March 28, 2004
I suggest you learn the proper format of poetry, Jet, or don't do poetry at all.
Flu
8:42 pm | March 24, 2004
Just trying to have fun man. I figured you needed a post. As much as you might not believe this, I don't like to criticize poems (at least to the degree that I do prose) So anyway, nice effort, but that line about fun is waaaay out of place there.
Jetboogieman
6:47 pm | March 24, 2004
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Flu
4:36 pm | March 24, 2004
O Jetboogieman
Keep working on this poem
because we like to see
....poems.

We like to see
poems
that don't...
say weird things

like this

"This whole things for fun"

What the heck
does that mean?

Anyway..have fun
and keep....
writing.


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