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Comments for 'Unexpected Surprises Part 5'



Agent Shade
11:27 am | May 11, 2003
good lord mr. Jedi, this is really impressive...you should [indent] your paragraphs though, may make it a little easier to read, but i still loved it...well written, good plot and everything, keep them coming 9/10
Jaywhit10
3:39 am | May 10, 2003
Hey nice story, its very good, some mistakes here and there but in all a good one, keep it coming
me
3:47 pm | May 9, 2003
Hey guys, any advice will be apriciated!, enjoy!


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