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Comments for 'Sarge's Story: Stacker'



BrutalArt
11:08 am | January 2, 2004
I was being honest by saying your writing is boring. It's very mundane and uncreative and if you read it yourself you'll see my point. As for you freaking out over my comment, if you can't take honest criticism then maybe you shouldn't leave pointless, negative comments on so many people's stories. How old are you anyways?
Jamirus99
5:23 pm | December 10, 2003
Lol, I can almost gauruntee that Anonynous is Sentinel...you and BrutalArt need to get a life. Just because I'm harsh on your stories (for rightful reasons) doesn't mean you guys have the right to bash mine. Congrats on stooping to the lowest standards I have seen in a long time to try and put somebody down.

(12/10/03)
Anonymous
12:51 pm | December 8, 2003
"We will NOT being making it off of Halo."

Please explain what this garble means. I gave it a quick read but don't see any storyline at all.
BrutalArt
12:42 pm | December 8, 2003
I got bored after the first paragraph and stopped reading.
Gunnery Sergeant
6:20 am | November 29, 2003
Just freakin awesome, man. My favorite fic of all time.
Jamirus99
11:04 am | July 7, 2003
I appreciate all of your comments and I'm glad everybody liked the story. steele, your praise means alot to me, but I wish you'd read the ending again as I did include the Jonhson/Elite hug. I must say that I had alot of inspiration for writing this story....for some reason, I felt Stacker's story had to be told, and Second Squad's story as well, in a tale that would never conflict with the game itself. If I ever become that inspired again, you can be rest assured another fan fic by me will pop up, but as for right now, I remain dormant. Thanks again everybody; I appreciate it.
Jamirus99
11:04 am | July 7, 2003
Oh, and I would like to thank Traumatised Marine again for supporting me through the endeavor of writing this piece.
Dracon88
1:37 pm | May 21, 2003
nice story...don't know how I found it but suddenly I saw it and started reading. Very sweet ending.
Chris mills
1:26 am | April 9, 2003
Sarge,sarge,sarge, and sarge. just kidding man thanks for the comment, i'm writing a better 1 witch should be done soon i look forwerd to your comments.
weevil of the warp ::74:: six flags
12:20 pm | March 21, 2003
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12:18 pm | March 21, 2003
back again!

brain malfunction
Steele
2:53 am | March 13, 2003
Looks like somebody beat The Maw on Legendary. You should have put in the part where they hug and make-up, though. Good story--from what I read.
LostRock
2:30 am | March 13, 2003
Awesome. Simply awesome.
Some parts were slightly confusing, tho, when you forgot to put quotation marks in.
jcmaster242
10:16 pm | March 12, 2003
hey i had little time to read it cause i had to go some where but from what i read it was great.
i was expecting to read little kid stories that didn't make much sense. But yours was great i read the ending and it is a movie ending. Very good work!
Traumatised Marine
8:48 am | March 12, 2003
Will my hands be ever tarnished with that little revision thing? It had TWO MORE CHAPTERS!

This is all Jamirus' work, I just sort of read it and told him how much I liked it.

The ending is possibly the most epic one in the whole of HBO!
monitor101
3:42 am | March 12, 2003
Almost like another revision by TM.


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