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Comments for 'Short Story (Part 2)' |
Jamie (The Author)
12:32 pm | August 18, 2002
I just wanted to point out that it's a mistake on the part of HBO. My original piece does make use of the " thing instead of the ' thing but it changed when I put it on here. But then again they did un-chunkify my work when they put it on here. I'm not complaining
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vector40
5:58 am | August 18, 2002
Sarge, that's not necessarily true. Double quotes are the more common convention in the US, but either one (single or double) are technically correct. And in the UK, single quoting is the standard.-v
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Pash Apprentice of Wizardry
12:21 am | August 18, 2002
Glad to see you on Fanfiction.net
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The Author
4:55 pm | August 17, 2002
Thanks very much!!!! It's nice to have someone say sommit useful
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Sarge
4:15 pm | August 17, 2002
Okay if its for English class you need to indent your paragraphs. Okay and its " not ' as a quote. You said 'No' it should of been "No".Adn its slightly confusing for your average day idiot a.k.a. Me.
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The Author
2:40 pm | August 17, 2002
Could you tell me where my mistakes are because otherwise I have to re-read it all and I'm still writing the rest of it. It would be a great help! Thankyou
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Sarge
1:44 pm | August 17, 2002
Yes arch is insightful but he also only says good things about every story. Anyway this is a good story a few mistakes but its good.
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The Author
10:41 am | August 17, 2002
For some reason when I sent my story the bit at the beginning about it being unfinshed was chopped off. I just wanted to say that I am adding more to the story but I thought by adding it here people would give me ideas of how to carry it on. Thanks to Jason and Arch (whoever u are) for complimenting me.I'd like to hear you guys suggestions on what I could do next. Also I wanted to say that the story that I am posting on here is actually going to become my fiction piece for my English GCSE so help will be apreciated greatly. I'd like to contact Arch becuase he seems to be an isightful person. I'm only 15 and I don't find it easy to write stories that little bit took me 4 and more hours and thats less than two pages. CONTACT ME I NEED HELP
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