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Comments for 'Underestimated: Part 1'



Thomas Harper
11:15 pm | March 25, 2004
lets just say that its in between. not REALLY good, but not REALLY bad. just....OK.
Helljumper
8:05 pm | March 21, 2004
I thought it was ok, nothing special
Ikabuianman
7:21 pm | March 21, 2004
i forgot to fix some errors... in the first place
The Collector
11:05 am | March 21, 2004
1) will they be cloning the kids and then speed up their growth process
2) I take it you didnt pay attention to the novels
3) Read the novels again especially First Strike - Epilogue
4)add more descriptive narration and story content.
Not bad I take it this is your first public attempt huh. Well good luck with that


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