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Comments for 'A Series of Wierd Events - Sequel, Part One [WALKER]' |
Walker
1:33 pm | June 24, 2004
Hmm... since the future of me and my unit was already written into the rest of this series by H_K, let's assume that's the rest of my series. "I finish what I start."
Somebody did it for me.
-Walker
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Walker
2:38 pm | June 17, 2004
Heh... guess I never got around to that sequel, did I?
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Blue Angel
1:21 pm | November 27, 2003
excellent stories gentlemen, i like the idea of this. its going quite well. as for me i'm very sorry i wasn't able to post right away, but my health is swaying just a little. but very good. :)
tah tah for now.
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Mainevent
1:43 am | November 27, 2003
LOL, If you look at it in a certain way, yes, yes it does mean that.
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Alpha Lance
9:00 am | November 26, 2003
Well, I have been grounded and I will be grounded for a long time. But I come here and find this place really fuck up. So I'm jusy gonna leave HBO for a while until Wu or someone banns all of these asshole going around and spamming the place.
BTW, great story Walker. Bye.
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Hunter_Killer
11:26 pm | November 25, 2003
And a little note:
According to Mainevent's description of Imperious, I'm important *Grins toothly* =|)
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Hunter_Killer
11:24 pm | November 25, 2003
H_K: Hmm.... *Ponders* Maybe you right.
Whole Room: WOAH!!!
H_K: Oh, will you knock it off!? I say other people are right all the time!!!!
Everyone: *Laughs*
Mainevent: lol, good one, H_K! *Laughs uncontrolably in the middle of the floor*
H_K: GRRRRR... *Readies moddified Needler and ARs...*
Everybody: *GULP*
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Jamirus99
12:11 pm | November 25, 2003
This was much better than the other stuff....I can't even comment on the Sterfrye one.
Solid writing. Above the bar. Can't say by how much without being cruel again, but definitely a big step in the right direction. Good job Walker.
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Jamirus
11:01 am | November 25, 2003
Hunter, it's not that I don't like your writing as a whole.
Don't get me wrong! I'm as harsh as I am because I feel I have to be. If something doesn't live up to my standards, I slam it because I hope that the author will listen and improve. Just ask Frensa how mean I was to him back in the day.
I have nothing against you Hunter and I believe your intertwining fic could be something good if you guys could cut some of the stuff and add more original content. Get to work!
I realize I may not be likeable because of the amount of negative or lukewarm comments I post, but beleive me guys, I do it for you. And, in any case, when I DO compliment somebody, you know it's good. work for that at least!
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Mainevent
2:14 am | November 25, 2003
Imperious
1.Arrogantly domineering or overbearing
2.Haughly; arrogant; overbearing; as, an imperious tyrant; an imperious manner.
3.Imperative; urgent; compelling
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Hunter_Killer
1:50 am | November 25, 2003
Why? No cussing here? And DON'T INSULT the people who send me Fics. You comming on a very thin nerve, weared away by the critics on HBO over time.
Ster got an imerius writing attitude too!? Why you no like it!? Cause we started out at home, with no action at front!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?
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Hunter_Killer
1:50 am | November 25, 2003
Why? No cussing here? And DON'T INSULT the people who send me Fics. You comming on a very thin nerve, weared away by the critics on HBO over time.
Ster got an imerius writing attitude too!? Why you no like it!? Cause we started out at home, with no action at front!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?
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Hunter_Killer
10:36 pm | November 24, 2003
Yah, because I'm like Wu with these 'From the Point of View of"... someone, I don't add or subtract nuthin, it goes or it dont.
And this goes! 10/10 man! =)
- Delta Squad Leader
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Mainevent
10:34 pm | November 24, 2003
Now I have to write one from my squad's point of view...
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Walker
10:27 pm | November 24, 2003
Oh, and I hope no one was pissed at me because of the lack of indentation... it wasn't me who submitted it, remember. Not that I'm blaming H_K. Next time I'll send it to him with [indent] already in there.
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Walker
10:25 pm | November 24, 2003
And the thing about killing is our business is reportedly the slogan of the 81st Infantry. Just forr reference.
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Walker
10:18 pm | November 24, 2003
Not at all, Hornet.
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hornet34
6:42 pm | November 24, 2003
LOL, I love it. Seriously, though, you write some of the best dialouge of any around. That one part, "Killing is our business" and "Business is good." That's great stuff. And I like how you give every marine a different personality and background. Well, I've got to go read the others now.
Oh, and I've finally submitted another fanfic. You know I hate when people beg for others to read their stuff, but I'm figuring you wouldn't mind Walker.
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