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Comments for 'THe Adventures of Lt. Jake, Part Five'



Hunter_Killer
10:19 am | September 11, 2003
Good point. =)
you give the bastard to much credit
8:51 pm | September 10, 2003
-Walker
Hunter_Killer
11:15 am | September 10, 2003
Thanks to DUDE, Alpha Lance, and Walker. =)

Sergeant B, I respect your opinoin. =p
Alpha Lance
10:46 pm | September 9, 2003
Yeah. Sergant B say that all of the stories of writters are bullshit. But it was great, and it doesn't matter if you use the Chief in your stories, 9.8/10.
Hunter_Killer
8:38 pm | September 9, 2003
Holy shit, what a conikidink. Me and Walker posted within 3 Minuites! COOL! =)
Hunter_Killer
8:36 pm | September 9, 2003
So, Sergeant B, any score for me, or is this "Bullshit", like all the others I made?!?!?!?
Walker
8:33 pm | September 9, 2003
Interesting twist at the end, having the mind control chips and all. 10/10. That's all I have to say.
Hunter_Killer
7:28 pm | September 9, 2003
This is the last time we see the chief. Except when Jake gives him rides, oh yah and one other part: THE WHOLE LAST 4 PARTS! :p. Lol.
Sergeant B
6:54 pm | September 9, 2003
Very good. And you used the Master Chief in a better way. But don't use the CHIEF anymore, okay? I liked the way you used him by not making him the main character, but it makes your score crummier. Well, at least it's not bullshit.
DUDE
6:23 pm | September 9, 2003
Nice twist. I have thoroughly enjoyed this series. Keep it up.
Hunter_Killer
10:08 am | September 9, 2003
Yahoo! This is my 27th story here! YAY! *Blows up party baloon. It pops shortly thereafter*

WAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =(((((((((


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