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Comments for 'A Series of Wierd Events - Sequel, Part Eight[H_K]'



Hunter_Killer
2:37 pm | February 5, 2004
Yah.

(Why am I writing such damn skimpy comments? I can do that! Muahahah!!!!=)
FOrunnER
1:57 am | February 5, 2004
Your moving a little fast like teemus said, but I thought it was good. If'd you'd mentione me every once in a while that would be good, but I know alot of ppl are asking you that so I wont push it.
Hunter_Killer
6:11 pm | February 4, 2004
Thanks, teemus.
teemus
2:37 am | February 4, 2004
Good matiriel, but i still have to say your moving to fast for my taste. Overall it was nice, keep it up.
Hunter_Killer
1:30 am | February 4, 2004
Thanks =)
CoLd BlooDed
11:46 pm | February 3, 2004
You WILL be screwed if you don't stow it, marine. :D Nice, haha.

Great job, keep it up! :D


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