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Comments for 'HELLJUMPERS CHAPTER EIGHT: A PROLONGED WAR'



witelancer
12:38 pm | November 26, 2003
Excellent...your work is not only technically accurate (and believable) but a very compelling story overall.
stvSkiRacer.com
1:29 am | February 26, 2003
I reallt like these stories. There cool write some more.
helljumper
6:23 pm | September 12, 2002
i know. its not quantity. it is quality that i am going for.
el_halo_diablo
5:54 pm | September 12, 2002
well don't write too much just because you can.
helljumper
1:53 am | September 12, 2002
i know a lot about today's modern military. you will find many terms and weapons in my stories that relate to toaday's military equipment. later on when i get used to writing like this, i will try to incorporate battlefield tactics. i have never written a short story just bacause i wanted to. they were always assignements for school. any ideas you guys have, if i like them, i will definitely use them. i could hundreds of pages, i just need some ideas to get started.
Sarge
10:15 pm | September 11, 2002
Saw is a real gun its cool to its also known as m249. Its an awesome full auto.
el_halo_diablo
8:40 pm | September 11, 2002
last parts always seem to be the best, YAY finally someone that was a good guy died!!!
Sarge
6:39 pm | September 11, 2002
I like it.
Wado
5:58 pm | September 11, 2002
This one was good. Nice ideas. Don't the Covenant have any cool new weapons/shields too?
Spartan415
4:55 pm | September 11, 2002
Man, this is one of my favorite series along with many others but this is really good for a beginner. You sure you havn't done any other stories before? Keep it up.


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