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Comments for 'HELLJUMPERS CHAPTER 10: The Beginning of the End' |
x Hell Rainer x
5:24 am | July 18, 2004
Havok... great story!! finish the HELLJUMPERS story now!!...its freakin July 2004 now and the last post of the story was in 2002, so get your friend to finish the story please.... thank you
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Delta117
5:22 am | August 2, 2003
I have read your papers and they are indeed very good. I am just wondering if Helljumpers goes into Foresaken Forefathers or not.
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turbus
8:33 pm | March 6, 2003
uh....is this going to be continued? cuz' i think it should.
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el_halo_diablo
2:54 am | October 9, 2002
I'll have you know that I didn't say it was the worst thing I've ever read, I'm just saying, he needs a little more practice, and he'll be a great writer.
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Darkmage_33
2:11 am | October 9, 2002
You are all full of SH*T. If you were educated enough to find your own ass in the dark, you would recognize some descent litt. It is developed, secure, and something above a 3rd grade reading level. Havok, give my compliments to the author.
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Krondorian Guard
2:04 am | October 9, 2002
I dunno, I think the litterary qualities of this one are pritty good. A commander must keep total and impartial control of his men, as mistakes mean death. Lets see what the second part is about..
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el_halo_diablo
9:47 pm | October 8, 2002
sorry, that was me :)
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Anonymous
9:45 pm | October 8, 2002
Sarge, his freind wrote it, and he's not the best writer in the world, but the story was still good.
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havok
5:20 pm | October 8, 2002
yeah my friend wrote this one. i had basically no idea how to continue so i thought i would let him just for kicks. yeah the quality is dropping i know. i am gonna try to pick it back up to finish off this series.
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Sarge
10:46 am | October 8, 2002
It seems to me like the commander shouldn't piss off his men in high pressure situations they might break down or mutiny. What happened? I wonder because your first fiew chapters were real good but then suddenly it seems kind of I don't know... Well I like your Death Dealers one so can't wait for you to start that.
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el_halo_diablo
2:31 am | October 8, 2002
so did you or your friend make this?
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