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Comments for '[Contact - Chapter 1] Not Covenant...'



DaXecutioner
8:00 pm | August 29, 2003
like da story. im postin a little late cuz i just read it. please righ another 1. it would be great.
HunterKiller
6:05 pm | April 18, 2003
Good job just want you to use [indent] 6/10.
James Kinsella
3:34 pm | April 18, 2003
Good story. Spelling needs a little work, and you should [indent], but other than that pretty good. As if the humans don't have enough trouble...
Havok
3:25 pm | April 18, 2003
good opening to the series. the aliens were forerunner maybe? good work


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