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Comments for 'Revolution: part 3 the simulator'



Bean
8:20 pm | July 7, 2003
I read it are you happy now?
gruntkiller
5:24 pm | April 7, 2003
te heh nobodies gonna read this so im just gonna say this, EVERYBODY (except me covert, el halo diablo and wado) SUCKS (i dont mean that i just want to see if anybody reads this
gruntkiller
1:01 am | August 31, 2002
theres more like it to mcome ive been working on the fourth and fifth for a while and there near done.
shadow_hunter117
3:57 am | August 30, 2002
I doubt any of this would happen but its something to read until Halo 2 comes out. But It's way to short and the grammer mistakes can get annoying. But otherwise it's a pretty good story.
Knightmare
1:57 pm | August 28, 2002
mainly I was just talking errors but I agree with them it is an awesome story
Knightmare 2(not the original)
2:58 pm | August 27, 2002
Your story was well written , but like evry one else said make them longer. They have great potential
el_halo_daiblo
10:55 pm | August 26, 2002
well I thought it was good, but I would have liked it more if it(the story) was about 4 times its size. It was a bit short
Knightmare
6:30 pm | August 26, 2002
a bit more description needed... Too short, watch the grammar errors etc. Just watch out for the 300 pound Cortana
Bean
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
eh?


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