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 Comments for 'Halo: A Troubled Galaxy Ch. 4 (Final)' |  
 
 
		
			| Ghost 12:00 am | January 1, 1970
 Hey can you please rate my story. Thanks
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			| Mainevent 12:00 am | January 1, 1970
 5-6/10
 
 Thin plot.-1
 
 Thin characters.-1
 
 Lack of detail.-1
 
 Good enough spelling.+1
 
 Good enough grammar.+1
 
 No pseudocode.-1
 
 You can make a logical progression of events in a moderate to easily readible format. +3 to 4
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			| Ghost 12:00 am | January 1, 1970
 Sorry guys ive decided not to post a all in one of my story Sorry i have my reasons
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			| ghost 12:00 am | January 1, 1970
 i hope you liked my story
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