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Comments for 'The Unknown Quantity Chapter 1'



Berconius
4:12 pm | July 4, 2004
A bit too much unneeded attention to minutae like you new Sniper rifle, but it's all good. Nothing TOO special but it sounds okay to me.

7/10
Flying Battle Man
7:08 pm | July 1, 2004
Thanks. Getting praise from you is kinda hard when writing an ODST story. I'm glad you liked it. I know it was kinda shot but thats why I put Chapter 1 ;D. Your Force Recon stories are beating all other stories senseless. I'll use that [ hr ] thing too. thx again

FBM
Helljumper
6:52 pm | July 1, 2004
Good job. You did the ODST justice. I liked it. Keep it up, I'm watching out for the next part. It was a little short though and you could use more details in setting the scene, what people look like, a little background. Make us care about them. When you switch between characters you should use [hr] You started with the Lt and switched to the Sgt. It got a little confusing.

ODST


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