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Comments for 'Mentality of a UNSC Marine'



Nick Kang
11:54 am | May 22, 2004
lol. Save the Wooks!

NK
Flying Battle Man
1:28 am | May 22, 2004
I did get stuck a few times with the rhyming, but about half way through, i made it into a song on accident. T S D and O thing took a while to figure out but I'm glad that it was understood.
And Kang? I didn't mean our planets. I meant whatever their worlds support as whales would be nuked. i mean, imagine, an elite marching through a street holding a sign that reads "Save the Wooks!" That would be priceless.
LostRock
8:53 pm | May 20, 2004
The poem comes out even better in your head if you read it in Sergeant Johnson's voice with some rap music in the background. hehe.

I liked it!
Nick Kang
5:13 pm | May 20, 2004
Nuke the whales? I don't mean to sound all tree-hugger-ish, but whales are our friends!

The poem was pretty cool, though at some times it seemed like the rhyming was off-balance.

NK
Mainevent
12:05 am | May 20, 2004
At least STYDK has the right idea. NUKE THE WHALES!
someone that you dont know
10:15 pm | May 19, 2004
YA!! NUKE EM ALL!!!! NUKE EM!!! That is how you solve all the worlds misery. NUKE EM!!! No wasting time training soldiers or anything. Instead of spending 100,000,000,000 on weak soldiers, spend 100,000,000,000 on a big, powerful, NUKE!!!!! I am done now. Great poem anyways
SOS.Odin
9:32 pm | May 19, 2004
i liked it
the tsd and o part
messed with me fer a sec
but i like it
Horror
7:51 pm | May 19, 2004
Definatley better than my poem, which by the way I'm never doing again...
Mainevent
3:09 pm | May 19, 2004
Not bad at all.

Though I think in some parts you tried to hard to rhyme, it still came off pretty well.


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