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Comments for 'Magna Nexus Incident Pt 1'



Nick Kang
9:48 pm | May 25, 2004
Yeah, the Elites' shieds break so easily...and Grunts go down with only three shots from a pistol in their arm...

NK
MC's Cousin
1:23 pm | May 25, 2004
Yeah, but you have to admit, going through AotCR or TaR on Easy really serves to realx you on a rainy or stressful day. Ah...break out the hot coco and grenades...

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MCC
Nick Kang
12:36 am | May 25, 2004
Woah...bad detail. It made it sound like a Human Super Super Cruiser was facing off against a Covenant Phantom on SUPER EASY difficulty.
I appoligize for any offense this post may have cause.

NK
Mainevent
8:27 pm | May 24, 2004
How do you pin people down in a space battle?

It's not like you can corner them. And the Covenant sound way to weak in this.

Couple that with HJ and MCC's comments and you got yourself a .... I don't give ratings. You're very lucky.
Helljumper
8:35 pm | May 23, 2004
Yea

ODST
MC's Cousin
7:24 pm | May 23, 2004
Once again, I am in FULL agreement with Helljumper. And look at him, he was so upset he couldn't type strait!
You need to se the code, for one. You also need to majorly proofread and spellcheck your story before you think about posting it. And you need to get you facts strait.
Always capitalize ship deisignations, ranks, and such (i.e.-Longswords, Pelicans, Covenant, ship names, etc.).
Also, you military dialogue and actions were really off. A Captain would not say "fuck" in the middle of an engagement, a good one anyway. Aslo, because of your lack of detail, it went way to fast in amny places.
And lastly: MAC do not fire 102mm rounds (they wouldn't do squat to a Covie ship). You need to read the books. If you have, you need to do so again, and again, and again.

But before you write again...you just need to keep working and trying.

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MCC
Helljumper
4:01 pm | May 23, 2004
too many noobies on this site. Privates do not fly Longsword figthers. Officers fly them, not privates come on man. YOu got Captains taking orders from sergeants and Sergeants knowing more aobut a misson than a Captain, i don't believe it.

ODST


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